Help with sugar glider ads PLEASE!!!!?

http://www.ksl.com/index.php?nid=218&ad=10527674&cat=&lpid= this is my ad i have not gotten any emails or calls what could i do to make people actually want them tell me what is wrong with my ad! I WILL GOVE U 5 STARS IF THE ANSWER IS GOOD!!!! PLase tell me what i can do to improve it